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Writer's Block  [13+]
Brief Description
by Geoff
Review of Writer's Block  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hallo
I visited your portfolio because your WdC anniversary is in June. I saw the title and thought, "Okay, let's see one more piece about this topic!"

Was I ever surprised! *Shock*

It was nothing like what I'd expected. It turned out to be a poem which compared aspects of nature and the garden to writers' block. An unusual combination, done very well. Great imagery and emotions evoked.

While the poem is great and works, and as a writer/reviewer I have no suggestions, as a reader I did get upset that it turned a bit dark. The 'future compost' phrase had led me to expect comedy, and the sudden descent to love and laughter 'littering' and finally death, took the wind out of me. You then bring it back to 'writing', as a reminder that that's what it's about!

You've said 'brief description' in your brief description! I guess this is so that the poem comes as a surprise, but maybe you'd like to add something to get more clicks for this item. And maybe some WritingML like font and size to enhance the flow.

Thanks for sharing this unusual piece!
Write On!

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