Hi, Angelica- Happy Mothers Day! , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Contest Entries"  "A Second Friend" , because I discovered it on the "I Write in 2024"  forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Joe taking Zoe with him. The conversation and interaction among the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part is the lesson this story taught. I like that part because it emphasized supporting your friends.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the lesson it taught.