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Bikeriders Guest Book  [E]
Come on in and let's get to know each other.
by Bikerider
Review by Maryann
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Hi Bikerider! Our paths always cross on WDC, especially at "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group, but I figured since we are now on the same Game of Thrones team that I might peek in at your Guest Book to, as you said in your brief introduction, get to know you better.

You have one of the best guest books that I've ever had the pleasure to see. I must say that my first impression was the animated Bike riding image. It's so cute, and the bright red color is eye-catching.

The very first paragraph prompts the reader to sign in. I hope I will remember to do that after I finish this review. I don't have the best memory, but my intentions are sincere.

Your readers also learn a bit of what they will expect to see in this very long guest book heading. You let them know that you will provide many suggestions to activities and items which they might learn or have fun. I thought this was a great start to the page.

The presentation of the page, by the way, seems done well and very easy to navigate because of the different colored fonts for each area.

Congrats on getting two of your stories published in an anthology!
You see, I succeeded in my goal of getting to know you better. I didn't know that!

*Star* The image under that section says it's unavailable. Maybe see if it can be fixed or perhaps add a different one.

I like how you added a thoughtful quote before your Sensations folder. You mentioned that writing is like opening a vein. What a creative way of saying to write from the heart!

You listed a few groups which you belong to, but "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group wasn't there. Here's my pout face *pout* sorry, we don't have an emoji for that! LOL Kidding, but maybe this page needs to be updated - perhaps in MAY after the Game of Thrones event is over. You have Simply Positive listed. I thought that group went out of business.. *Bigsmile*

The final section talks more about you. Thank you for your service as a police officer in law enforcement. *Salute*
You've also done triathlon, chef cooking, and cake decoration! ...And you write and travel, too! Very impressive, and I'm glad I stopped by.


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