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Casey Takes a Bath  [E]
My pet cat, Casey, took his first bath by accident, which led to an interesting night.
by RC3056
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My name is Angelica, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Casey takes a bath

First Impression: This is funny. About a curious cat named Casey who loves going to the toilet. The speaker remembers to put the cover down each time so he doesn't fall in. One day the speaker left the cover open. Here he comes and into the toilet he jumps in. After struggling to get out like a madman he got out, soaking wet and ran straight to bed to dry. Then the speaker stopped laughing and grabbed a towel to dry him. The chase began. After what seemed like forever, he crawled back into bed to dry himself. Then the speaker caught him. The towel wasn't enough, so the speaker decided to use a hair dryer. Gentle setting had to do to dry him off.

Funny throughout even when you thought it wasn't funny anymore. It's a typical cat reaction to water. They hate being in water. Great details. This may not be the last either.

What needs your attention: No spelling or grammar errors found.

What part I liked best: You were able to dry him off eventually and get a good night sleep. Also the humor throughout.

Overall impression: I could totally see this scene happening. In this case it's a cat obsessed with the toilet. That is hilarious alone. Anytime forgetting to cover the toilet and it's a catastrophe. Once again, I enjoyed reading this story. Unusual cat but first time mistakes happen. Too bad this one didn't learn its lesson. Good job and keep up the good work!

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

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