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 | GOT House Targaryen  [ASR] The book to hold all my activities for GOT  |
| (5.0)| Hi StaiNed-House Targaryen , This review was written on behalf of House Targaryen as part of "Game of Thrones" ! Disclaimer The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. What I liked ... Your title gives nothing away, but it is a fabulous tease to draw readers in.  I am trying to review everyone who has been a part of Game of Thrones this April, and now, I find myself poking around your portfolio. I couldn't resist taking a peek at this story. I thought about writing this about one of my old dogs. Anyway, your story ... I really enjoyed reading it. Milo sounds like an adorable, little kitty. He sounds as though he rules the roost and knows he is the most important person on the planet.That made me smile because cats, in general, tend to have that attitude. The whole story made me smile, and I actually laughed out loud at the way Milo acted as though his speaking (out loud and in human English) is perfectly normal. Maybe it is; who am I to argue? Maybe, he has been speaking all along, and this is just the first time his human's ears have tuned themselves in. I love how the narrator hopes, at the end, that her cat will continue to speak the next day. Wouldn't it be lovely if this came true. Our pets would often make much better conversationalists than certain humans! The part about Milo being miffed at his human for taking up too much of the bed made me chuckle. Cats (and dogs, for that matter) take over, don't they. No matter how small they are, they need a minimum of 3/4 of the bed space at night. The other piece of humour that appealed to me was when the main character speaks of her cat's voice. She says she had imagined it as, "suave and a tiny Canadian twang. eh?" Firstly, the thought of her imagining her cat's voice already made me laugh. But also, the "Canadian twang, eh?" That's funny. My American hubby has told me that it is a joke that Canadians say eh after every sentence. I don't know how true that is, but your reference to it made me laugh.Suggestions: Only one. Going back to the sentence I just mentioned. "Canadian. eh?" The full stop is incorrect. You either need a comma instead, or a capital E in to make Eh? a new sentence. Parting comments: You have given me inspiration to write a story for this North Remembers prompt. I saw this when I was looking through the other day, and I thought of a few scenarios. I like the direction you went with it. I have enjoyed reding this story. Nice work. Choconut    My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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