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by Rojodi
Rated: E · Outline · Detective · #2307239
Another NaNo Outline
Oct 26 Outline Revision
I. Prologue
A. 1723 – The Sailors and Hussars
B. 1931 – The NYC Gangster
II. Beginning
A. 1990 – The Brownstone
1. Reading the report
2. Hearing from the Bride
3. Talking with the retired investigators
B. Same Day – NYC Offices
1. Etienne LaPierre, Jr.
2. Someone believed him
3. Money and people
C. Same Day – SUNY at Albany Library
1. Duane Harrison
2. Talking with archivists
3. Talking with genealogy students
4. Finding Longfellow’s name
D. Oldham and Newbury Offices
1. Longfellow meets the client
2. She IS the love
3. She isn’t hiding anything from them
III. Middle
A. Schoharie County
1. Longfellow visits with cousins
a. They’re upset that someone’s trespassing on the property
b. The county LEOs are doing nothing
c. One senses that there’s more to than just “pesky teenagers”
2. He visits the sheriff's office
a. Runs into another cousin, a deputy
b. Under orders to NOT investigate the trespassing
c. New sheriff's orders to NOT investigate
B. Schenectady County
1. Old and New
a. Investigators hand over copies of interviews
b. They sense something’s amiss
c. Ask for him to “chat with the ghosts
2. Brownstone
a. Talk with the Bride
b. She thinks the client’s holding something back
C. Albany County
1. SUNY Professor is robbed of briefcase
2. Information on possible locations of the Iscariot Silver in NY state
D. Road Trip
1. Back to Schoharie
2. Into the caverns
IV. Ending
A. Double-crossed
B. Ghost Revenge
C. Finding Silver, Too
D. Shootout, Again
E. Saying Goodbye
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