This was another one of freebie books. I don't remember where I got it from but it was there. This book is the story about the a girl who can read minds. She has the great capability but is unaware about the extent of her powers. The hero is send to recruit her for training purpose and rest I'm sure you can make up.

passing time.

the gullibility of the heroine. I wanted to laugh out at some sequences where I could see that what's going to happen next, but she remained ignorant throughout.

the mistakes.

read the next book in the series.

engrossed, but not because of its quality. I think it was more because I wanted to know how the author is going to show the next scene.

needs a new editor.

it's a diverting read and it's free.

it is predicatble, it has too many errors.

I have a soft spot for the people who try to write well-known storyline. LOL.

Alright, it's a YA romance. But the story does have it potential. Probably if it's well-edited, it'll appeal to many more people.

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