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Evolution of Love 2

by sindbad

Rated: 13+ · Book · Experience · #2171316

As the first blog entry got exhausted. My second book

Evolution of Love Part 2

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Schnujo is Late to Lannister

Apr 25, 2024 at 4:21pm
In response to "THE FOUR LAWS OF A SHAMAN "

What beautiful and inspiring words! Thank you for sharing! However, be sure to also share where you got this from as I ran it through a plagiarism checker and you know what I found.

I'm not saying not to post things like that. It's a very meaningful thing to write. I'm just saying to be sure you post where it came from originally, even if you added some of your own and/or had AI write a good bit of it for you (which should also be mentioned). And, naturally, be sure not to enter things like this into contests.

Anyway, thank you for sharing this! I hope you post it on the Newsfeed (with a disclaimer, of course). It may help someone in need.

tracker

Apr 9, 2024 at 11:49am
In response to "The Burning House"

I needed this a few days ago, yesterday, and already this morning. Thank you for it. For no particular reason I clicked on Blogging. My entry is good also. It is right below yours.

Kåre Enga in Montana

Apr 6, 2024 at 1:58am
In response to "The Principle of Abundance"

I need to be reminded of this "This story is all about life. It teaches us that We must GIVE before We can RECEIVE Abundantly." when I write a poem for/about someone. My meagre words may have meanings even I don't recognise.

Recently, Rosemary thanked me for a poem I wrote for her years ago. And then within 24 hours I received a review for it here (after years of few views and no reviews).

STATIC

Rosemary for memory

(13+)
A short poem for Rosemary Sinniger from 2011
#2170648 by Kåre Enga in Montana

Is it a great poem? That only matters to Rosemary and the few who have read it.

I gave without expecting anything in return.

Kåre Enga in Montana

Apr 6, 2024 at 1:37am
In response to "THE FACE OF THE STATUE OF LIBERTY"

I did not know this. Thank you. Men matter in American history. Women? Not so much. Their stories didn't always make the history books.

Kåre Enga in Montana

Mar 22, 2024 at 8:51am
In response to "Creator of the universe"

No life is perfect but happiness comes to those who can be grateful for what they have and can let go of the rest.

Elycia Lee ☮

Feb 23, 2024 at 9:56pm
In response to "Mistakes"

Need to print this out... LOVE #16

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Elycia Lee ☮

Feb 23, 2024 at 9:50pm
In response to "Success "

Relatives on Bulletin.

tj ~ endeavors to persevere!

Feb 7, 2024 at 12:36pm
In response to "Mistakes"

Thanks for the laughs, this is great.

🌸 pwheeler - love joy peace

Feb 6, 2024 at 3:37pm
In response to "Success "

Lol!

intuey

Feb 6, 2024 at 9:38am
In response to "Success "

March 1, 2019 at 3:52am

#953461

Dedicated to Armed Forces

Last night while sleeping
I died. . or so it seemed
Then I went to heaven
But only in my dream

Up there my Record Keeper met me
Standing at the Entry Gates,
He said, “I must check your record…
Please stand here and wait.”

He turned and said “Your record
Is covered with terrible flaws,
On earth I see you rallied
For every losing cause.”

I see that you drank rum,
smoked and killed too,
Fact is, you’ve done everything
A good person should never do.

We can’t have people like you up here….
Throughout your life all you did was hear,
You carried out orders without pausing to think.
You never asked for instructions in ink..

Then he read the last of my record
And his eyes grew moist.
He took my hand gently and said,
“Come in.

‘You stood in isolated places and shivered alone
You left your kith, kin, hearth and home
You come from an unresponsive, ungrateful nation
You were denied your rights by every Pay Commission,
He led me up to the Caretaker of Heaven …
“Take him in and treat him well,
He has served in the Indian Armed Forces …
He’s done his time in Hell...

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