Wow.
Interesting and promising storyline just as the writer said in the intro. Lovely imagery, fluid expression, vivid descriptions and good flow of scenes. There is a nice balance of emotion, suspense and horror in the narration.
Needs some editing on the grammatical portion but overall, it was an enjoyable piece of reading.
Waiting for more of your creative writing Joseph.
Thumbs up!
Tabeer
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