This poem made me feel so sad inside. Knowing someone has to live their life this way. Or in some other manner besides IV. I could feel the acceleration of waiting for that one drip in time. Very good piece. Keep on Writing!
Love the flow of the format used. The descriptions had me picturing the scenes in my head. It had me feeling his burden and load. Great piece. Keep on writing!
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