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Review by Alex Zynder
Rated: E | (4.0)
a lot of writers try to rhyme for the sake of rhyming in their first piece, but you didn't. you were honest, structured, and not too wordy. good job, and a good start. can't wait for the next one.
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Review of The Bottle  
Review by Alex Zynder
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
a strong beginning and a strong end. it grabs you and finishes fittingly.
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