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Review by Carol
Rated: E | (5.0)
This made me laugh
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Review by Carol
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I like the twist in the tail.
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Review of Shrug  
Review by Carol
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
That last line really got to me. When I reread the poem I saw how you had set it up perfectly - the first lines are quite clinical and, dare I say it, cool, and therefore keep me, the reader, at a distance. But then there is the shock of the last line, which is like being pulled through cold space with all the planets and stars rushing by, into a sudden warm hug.
Wonderful.
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Review by Carol
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is really funny! I love it.
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