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Review of INTO THE BONEYARD  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I definitely liked your short story, Billy’s desire to conquer Tracy was starkly contrasted to what actually happened. Leading up to the bone yard and, even in the bone yard, as she teased him, was excellently done. Although I think the whole ‘vampire thing’ is beyond overused, this is by far my favorite vampire short story on writing.com.

Coming from Maine myself, I thought that bit was funny :P
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