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Review of Their Adventure  
Review by AmdWriter
Rated: E | (4.0)
Sounds like a great start to a children's adventure book! I really hope you've considered writing the adventure part! ;D
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
And I think you have hit the nail on the head! The ending is unhappy because of what the children have learned. Truthfully, I think you took what was there and some subtext, put it together and learned the lesson of the book. This is a great review and some awesome essay writing!!
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