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Review of 11 - 19  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Overall I found this writing very imaginative. Very creative and graphic. The idea of going back in time to murder the parent's of Lizzie Borden yourself was interesting. In the 4th paragraph where you say "I needed to be to purchase the bullet" did you mean to put " I needed to be ABLE to purchase the bullet"? That's really the only thing I found with the story. Overall very well done.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
First of all I would like to say that every writer's style is unique and their own. These are simply suggestions *Smile*

Impression:
Very nice rhyming scheme. Very nice reflection of a love lost.



Thoughts:
I felt like the writer was losing someone or had lost someone they loved by that person never really loved them back. Very nicely done on portraying emotions.


Suggestions:
Watch your capitalization on words like "I, I'm " stuff like that. Your' should be You're.

Final Review:
Over all I thought it was well written. Just watch the things I mentioned above. Like I said overall it's a very nice poem. Keep writing.



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Rated: E | (5.0)
Once again, very well done. I can tell you that I am so addicted to reading your series that I visit your port everyday looking for new stuff on Lisa Lansing. My husband picks on me because I am truly addicted and I can't wait to read the rest. You are a true writer. The last time I was this interested in a writer it was James Patterson LOL. Good job, keep up the good work! Can't wait to read more.
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Review of Soul For Sale  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nicely done. Very creative, it kept my attention the whole time wondering who was going to outbid whom. It was also very light hearted and comical in some ways. I don't really do reviews on short stories for I am more of a poetry person but I loved this one. Thanks for the read.
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Review of Memories Unmade  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
First of all I would like to say that every writer's style is unique and their own. These are simply suggestions *Smile*

Impression: Very romantic, yet sad at the same time



Thoughts: I liked this very much, it had me smiling at parts and my heart hurting at others.



Suggestions: None


Final Review: Very well written, imagination was born and running wild in this poem. Thanks for the read.




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Review of What If  
Rated: E | (5.0)
First of all I would like to say that every writer's style is unique and their own. These are simply suggestions *Smile*

Impression:Very catchy. Keeps you interested and thinking through out the whole poem



Thoughts: Almost heart wrenching to me, for at points I feel like I am losing something I love dearly.



Suggestions:None what so ever


Final Review: I really really enjoyed this poem!!!




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Review of Eyes Like His  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I thought that this was a very unique and romantic piece. I so totally go this and your feeling behind it. Good job, keep up the good work.

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Review of Perfectly Fine  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
First of all I would like to say that every writer's style is unique and their own. These are simply suggestions *Smile*

Impression: Can really feel your hurt and feeling of betrayal.



Thoughts: Wow! Really emotional and very well written



Suggestions: None


Final Review: Overall very well written. I like very emotional poetry as that is my specialty. Very much impressed. Keep up the good work.




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Review of True Love  
Rated: E | (4.0)
First of all I would like to say that every writer's style is unique and their own. These are simply suggestions *Smile*

Impression:Very nice poetry, rhyming scheme is pretty good



Thoughts:That you truly love whomever you wrote this for



Suggestions:Only thing I saw was that there needed to be a space between each other.


Final Review:Over all very good. Seems as if you wrote this from the heart. Keep writing. *Smile*




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Review of Poem For You  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I thought it was good, check your words I think one ran together and just needs a space. But overall it was good. Perfect for that special someone for V-Day. Keep writing
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