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Review of Last Visit  
Review by angimax
Rated: E | (4.5)
your writing shows the pain that you are experiencing.

Its good that you found the time, I imagine between tears, to write how you feel.

this is a great place to vent and write with your heart

take it easy and use your pain positively as in a character, give her the power to change it around.


hope things work out for you.

cheers max
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Review of Until Death . . .  
Review by angimax
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I am looking forward to continuing on your jouney with you chapters,.

They are well written and have enough in them to keep the reader interested.

I liked this line very much, 'eyes sparkle like blue crystal'

it shows in your writing that it's coming form your heart

well done looking forward to following your book

cheers max
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Review of Until Death . . .  
Review by angimax
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
wow .. reading your first chapter is amazing that you have actually survived such an ordeal.

am Looking forward to the next chapter.

You are a great writer and have already shown through your words how you feel,

well done
It must've been very hard to write
cheers max
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Review by angimax
Rated: E | (5.0)
A very beautiful poem.

very poignant and well written.

it was easy to read, and as a Angel lover, I loved it lol
well done..

I loved your ending.theses two lines the best.' But I will know the richest treasure,
The light that came upon your face'


. keep up the good work
cheers max
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Review of Purpose  
Review by angimax
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
A very good poem, full of emotion and pain. your words weep.

Glad that you are away from the at place now and are here to move forever forward.

well done

keep up the good work and positive place that you are now in

loved your last lines '.I do not crave life
Only a reason to live.'


cheers max
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Review of My Happy Place  
Review by angimax
Rated: E | (4.5)
very nice writing.
I wanna go there lol, It sounds like a wonderful place to visit.


loved this line ' A gentle breeze moves nature's wind chimes,' absolutely beautiful

good luck with the comp.

cheers max
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Review by angimax
Rated: E | (4.5)
wow. .. what a great ending, nothing what I expected.

well done, well written and a great use of words.

keep up the good work

cheers max
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Review by angimax
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
wow ... what a poignant poem

very sad but beautiful also.

your poem was well written

well done, keep up the good work

cheers max
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Review of Visions  
Review by angimax
Rated: E | (4.5)
well done.. your poem relates to today's society really well.

I know where you are coming from and your poem shows that you care.

great writing.

keep up the good work

cheers max
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Review by angimax
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
wow... your poem shows a lot of pain coming through, but also that you or your character has a friend.


a great start to this website, well done. Hope that you have many more items to display.

good luck

once again well done, and keep up the good work

cheers max
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Review of Story of a Son  
Review by angimax
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
wow, I had goose bumps when I finished your poem. I have worked with Autistic children for many years in kindergartens, So I am aware of your plight. We also transported (taxi) disabled children to and from school everyday for ten years.

A beautiful poem, well done. keep writing and you will bring light to yourself and others.
cheers max
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Review of Grandpa  
Review by angimax
Rated: E | (4.5)
wow, congratulations on a wonderful story. I had imagined the ending in my mind, only to be left dangling... well done loved your story.cheers maxx
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Review of WHY I LOVE WDC  
Review by angimax
Rated: E | (4.5)
As a new member its nice to see how this site is treasured by fellow writers. thank you for sharing, I am looking forward to reading and reviewing lots.
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Review of New Day  
Review by angimax
Rated: E | (4.0)
well done. short and sweat. a true senryu
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Review by angimax
Rated: E | (4.5)
What a delightful little story, written in diary form. loved it and chuckled a few times. it brought back some fond memories of my my cat. loved it .
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Review of Books Of Lives  
Review by angimax
Rated: E | (4.5)
I had to reread this, and found it beautiful. I love your concept of an Angels Library., your story is great. well done.
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