What a thought provoking poem. You bring to light the thoughts and fears that many feel in a very vivid style. Such a strong message held within such a short piece. You have captured a very true and genuine heartache felt from within and then shared this in such a way that the reader feels the same emotions that you are trying to relay. Great job, I hope to see more of your poems in the future.
There is nothing about this poem that needs improvement. There is alot to be said for cherishing our loved ones now while they are able to see the love that we hold for them and know the void that would be felt without thier presence. I really loved reading this poem, what drew me to your piece was the description of your poem. I hope that you continue to keep writing, I feel that you have alot to share with us all. Thanks again and good luck in the future.
Complete perfection. How wonderful I felt as I read your poem. This is a true inspiration to us all, for as terrible as things are on this earth (and indeed terrible it can be) there is salvation waiting for us all on the other end with our lord Jesus. Thankyou so much for posting your work, you are indeed a great poet who deserves recognition for sharing such an important message with us all.
What an incredible piece you have here.How wise you surely must be to depict something as time so graphically and honestly. You have an amazing gift that reflects not only your thoughts and beliefs but that of many.All too many times I (as well as others) have a difficult time reading and understanding the actual message that an author is trying to portray,that is certainly not the case here. I commend you on your wonderful work and will look for more of your writings in the future. Great job.
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