smokejumper's (antarticablue) Reviews

smokejumper

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42 Total Reviews Given

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#2236009

Review of The Little Cornershop of Pain

Review by smokejumper

Rated: 18+

| (4.5)

Impressive work of imagination. Weed out the typos and I am sure it will be reviewed by many more. I liked the concept. I would like to read more from you. Keep it coming.

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#1946340

Review of The Shoebox Poem/ Song Lyric

Review by smokejumper

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Really Powerful thoughts. It is really a nice gesture on your part to set up a fund to help such kids. Every drop counts. It kind of reminded me of a poem on the paper boat. Eventually the boat does sink in the rain water but while it is afloat, it thanks the rain that it is happy to be part of the ocean through it (the rain).

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#1819674

Review of Leafte

Review by smokejumper

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Fabulous piece of work. To fit words in free verse, making the shape out of letters of the words rich in images is not everyone's cup of tea. Impressive work on art in art form. It is good to have people like you to guide newbies like me.

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#1819633

Review of The illustrated guide to linking

Review by smokejumper

Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

Wealth of information. I have read quite a few on the link process but I find your entry to be most appropriate. Thanks.

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#1814498

Review of Starship Sentry

Review by smokejumper

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Cool. You leave me unsatisfied just as the Sentry. Believe me, for your talent, I was watching the build-up for some equally exciting end like the other story on Lizard Alien. You have raised the standards in your earlier story and it is imperative not to be compared on the art front. Whoever coined the word "masterpiece"? :)

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#1807541

Review of Move On

Review by smokejumper

Rated: E

| (4.5)

It somehow seems incomplete. I think you want to say some more to it.

Perhaps it is time to move on to new dreams and work them out. At the end of the day, life gets the odds and evens right in the same ratio as it does for everyone.

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#1799830

Review of In the Blink of a Minds Eye

Review by smokejumper

Rated: E

| (4.5)

I liked your idea of differentiation between the waters one has gone through to the ocean ahead. It kind of reminded me of a poetic expression where a poet relates himself/herself to be a paper boat. Though the poet compares self with the paper boat, he/she is grateful that it is playing it's part (role) in the life of a water. Good expression. Keep it up.