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Review of Elementalist  
for entry "Chapter 1" 
Review by artaqstar
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I'm not sure what age group your aiming at, a younger age MIGHT loose interest, however a more mature reader, I think, would enjoy this.
You're painting a picture with words but you also keep the story moving. I don't know if you read terry brooks or Tad williams, but they also have alot of description while moving the story along. To me it helps pull the reader into the story.
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Review of Elementalist  
for entry "Prologue" 
Review by artaqstar
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well This chapter certainly isn't uninteresting. It leaves the reader wondering and wanting more. :)
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Review of Space Case  
Review by artaqstar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Loved it! You should try publishing it in a kids mag. :)
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