I read your poem and I am sad. I read it again just to make sure and yes it made me sadder. The pain in the poem is To Me. The allegation is wonderful, so is the way you put it in writing. I hope that you will write more. It is very dramatic and well thought out.
I have read a lot of endings this a great ending to this story. I haven't don't much interative reading but it is relaxing. I love that the evil sister just didn't care. It would have been really funny had I got stuck in the end. lol, I will have to read some more of this style of writing. I really think that the family character is great. I also loved the fact that you put them up from so I could get a feeling for who they are. thank you
bart
Yes! I loved it. It is kind of hard not to as a person who is not into any of that stuff. Yes if i had it I would live with it. But to want it is not worth friends to love or family to spend time with. I encourage you to please continue to write. Your style is your own, and I like it alot.
bart
Wow! That is a great poem. Makes me wish I could make my appetite for life to increase. Your poem held my attention and my understanding all the way. I am happy that I read yours today. Please don't stop with this work. If you have more I would love to see soon.
Your poem was relaxing thinking about a butterfly, how graceful they sit and wait just for a while. The leaf and the jew'led wings made me think back to watching them as a child. And how they always left unless you caught them. The wording is good the poem brings back good memories. I hope that you are able to continue to show more of your work. This is a wonderful poem. thank you bart.
This is good info , I know a lot of people who read play other games but I didn't know the hours on end type even came to this website. That is great news. I would think that by the time you get 100 or so votes you should make sure your local news paper prints this up. Not all game players don't read.
where to begin so much research, 2 nd person i have ever seen with reasearch put down on paper. that is a big plus, I am an unskilled art lover that loves to look,read, and discover new things but to forget the old is bad enough. It hurts to be different but if life is like a box of "what is that movie" I would be the box at least i would not be eatten and maybe if i was lucky i would be saved. Please have great time and do not stop writing.
bart
This is a great poll to show my wife that thinks that i am the only person that snores...lol yes she does but does not beleive me. I started at a young age 4 younger brothers and a father that seemed at the time the loudest one of us all, over the years i think it has gotten worse i spend a lot of time waking up and being ask , to roll over, get on the futon , or just plan stop the noise. this poll is warming to the soul, and makes me feel happy i am not alone. lol
Wow, she must be happy she is not only smart but well liked. Both in the book and the movies. If she would make another book it would be good for all young people. I spent many hours answering phone calls and reading the first 5 books, easy to read and fun to keep up with the plot. your poll hit the spot. thank you.
It is encouraging to see so many other people from all over the world here, I like reading experiances from lots of different backgrounds. I am in a mixed marrige so it is really kind of cool to see what people think about here. And where they are from. Yes it is great that most people here are from the northern part of america, but it is great that so many people are from other places.
Love the topic, and yes 7 is a good number, We as Americans are well on our way to becoming the best at the 7 things that are bad. think about all the kids that sit and do nothing all day. mine is lust, i lust but i stay in check. even the thought makes me lust more. That my freind is part of what will be the end of use all sooner or latter someone will come knocking . lol and not everyone will be happy as they could have been.
Could use a few more things to poll but overall good enough. Would love to wait until you get about 2000 more polls just to find out what people think. I do think that people as a whole are selfish , and do what they want to do. Evil is one way to say something else so it is kind of hard to say what exstint evil you are asking for.
with all due respect it is hard to say , mom , dad i am gay, my brother did and he was looked at like he was crazy. I am into girls so that means more for me. or less if they are into themselfs or whatever it is called now. i do not care about politics about gay / lesbian relations i do not want to be called uncaring. I have freinds that are lesbians and we have a great time. I have to admit i am not fond of a guy looking at my butt. but whatever floats in the ocean stays there.
good poll, it is hard to get the right answers from a group of so few people but it does look like most of use are people who believe In GOD , so even with a few people answering your poll do not get worried, it is hard for people to stand up these days and say what they know is right because they are scared. it is easy for people to just say nothing than to say something. it seems to be our fate at this time. I hope you and wish you faith in your poll, and remember do not be scared to believe in the right to know the truth.
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