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Review of The Sound  
Review by bizzarrobob
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
An adventure that rolls along! I especially enjoyed Fred's inner dialogue. Funny guy. I really laughed out loud at the chain of events during his first night. You wrote the progression of the night in such a way, that just when I think he'll be ok - then bang! right out of the blue a new type of dilemma. Very comical, realistic, suspenseful a bit - entertaining. Great writing! Great story. Thank you!
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Review of My Hope For You  
Review by bizzarrobob
Rated: E | (3.5)
Nice, although derivative.
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Review of H.  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
simple elegance. well described. excellent flow. yeah.
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