Overall Impression:
I'm not altogether sure how I feel about this poem. It was pleasant to read, and I enjoyed it. It talks about a person scarred as a child, but the cause of the scarring is unclear. It'a a good piece, but it didn't WOW me.
Imagery:
The imagery was OK, nothing I found oustanding, but OK. I did feel the pain of the person described, so that was a good touch.
Rythym / Flow:
It flowed well from word to word and line to line, a very good job was done with the organization of the words.
Grammar / Spelling:
There were no errors to report either grammatically or in typing...
I think you did a good job with this piece, it is well written and free of errors and such. It just didn't connect with me (as an individual). Probably just me though
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Overall Impression:
Overall, I found this a very nice very traditional piece of poetry. The way you highlighted it in the different colours alone made me think of nature, especially fall. Great job.
Imagery:
I can see the different parts of the poem, as they were clearly described. Very good imagery, a good job with that.
Rythym / Flow:
It flowed well, in that nice way that poetry should just roll off your tongue.
Grammar / Spelling:
I found no errors in grammar or spelling...
WAY TO GO!!! I loved this poem it is a very nice description of the nature around you... beautiful.
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This poem followed the form well.
It had good rythym from one line to the next.
The imagery was very sweet and pretty.
I already noted the only possible typo at the first.
Overall, it was a beautiful sweet piece, and I enjoyed it a lot. Hope you have a great day.
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I didn't count the syllables or anything, but it sounds technically sound. It has good imagery. I found nothing in the way of typos and such. KUDOS.Have a great day
I loved the feeling in this poem. It feels all light and airy, like dancing or like spring. The words flow so nicely together. Thank you for having it here for me (and others) to read. I hope to read more of your stuff when I have more time.
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