What an excellent story of a wonderful time and a beautiful place. The imagery used in this short story was very persuasive. I felt like I knew the place of which you spoke. Great job on setting the place of subject in such a beautiful way!!! Keep up the good work that you are doing here. --B.L. Houghtalin
That was a great short story that brought my mind to a science fiction type setting. It was action packed enough to keep my full attentiveness. It made me think that it would make a great episode on the Sci-Fi Network!! I liked the twist at the end when the reader finally realizes that the whole encursion takes place in a V.R. station. About twelve stanzas from the end, the word late as in "It was already to late" is missing the "L" so it reads "It was already to ate".
I really enjoyed this story. Keep up the imaginative work!!
---Nephew Lee
This was a great poem that used excellent imagery. I too have found myself beholding the beauty of Lake Michigan sunsets. I hail from West Michigan and can relate to the beauty expressed in his piece. The only thing equal to or greater is a California sunset over the Pacific Ocean. I find nature is a great subject, and also very inspirational to poets such as ourselves.
Please keep up the good work you are doing here at WDC!!
B.L. Houghtalin
Wow,that was great. What a great parody of a classic. I really like the sense of humor and horror in this piece. I'm glad you are finally online.
Your nephew.....
B.L. Houghtalin(Lee)
Hey!! Welcome to Writing.Com. Thanks for sharing your work. I thought it was very good. I interpreted this poem as stating that it can sometimes be hard to speak your mind when put on the spot. I'm not sure if that is what you were going for, but the message was clear.
Keep up the great work, and keep on writing.
B.L. Unity (Houghtalin)
Wow, this one is really good. I like the imagery used, and also the simile used at the end, "The ventriloquist's hand". It seems to represent a sense of helplesness or things being out of our control. Once again, good job. Keep up the great content!!
B.L. Unity (Houghtalin)
This was a great poem about unconditional love. We all could use a little from time to time! Please keep up this good work you are doing here. Happy writings...B.L. Unity (Houghtalin)
You did a great job on this poem. I could not agree more with the message contained within this piece. I myself find the condition of our world to be one of my favorite subjects about which to write. Please keep up the inspiring subject matter, and keep writing!
B.L. Unity (Houghtalin)
Not a bad job on putting out an important message. It is important for everyone to become united, but it seems a long way away. To see my views on the war, check out my poem, "Soldier in the Meadow", and the lyrics to my song, "Between the Lines" Good job, and keep up the good work. Happy Writings!!!
The poem looks really good. That is cool that SilverValkrie helped you out. I am trying to figure out the whole bitem thing... Well keep up your good work... And I love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your Son B.L. Unity(Houghtalin)
This was an excellent read. I didn't know what to expect next. I also love randomness, and off the wall humor. Keep up the good work you are doing here... Ultima coolness!! You rock...
B.L. Unity (Houghtalin)
What a great poem. I especially liked the last part, "The puzzle? It has been solved." That is an awesome way to end a poem of love. Keep up the good work you are doing here.
Great poem...Even though you don't write to much poetry according to this piece, I think this one is very well written. I love the subject, and the way the words and parameter flow so smoothly together. Keep up the good work here at writing.com...
B.L. Unity (Houghtalin)
This poem was a very intriguing one. It was extremely insightful into the delvings of your life. This poem also raised questions that every soul has, that may never be answered. Such as " how do you get to be on the radio" and "how do you get to be that good"
Keep writing on and on and on and on!
This poem was one that really touched home for me. I feel, with great regret, that I may have left someone in the same position as this poem describes. In fact, this poem has encouraged me to try to contact this person for forgiveness.. Thanks for sharing a little bit of your life with the world. Keep writing on and on and on and on!!
This was a very funny and entertaining poem. the imagery was great. Oh, by the way... This is your son!!!! I'm glad to see you on this site. Write on and on and on and on.
A good poem with a good subject. Time can either be someone's enemy or best friend. Although time is a man made concept, it seems to affect the whole universe. I enjoyed your work.
This was a good introspection into the complexity of life. Masks are indeed representitive of "Plastic Nothingness", but also, there is always something behind the nothingness.
B.L. Unity
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