I thoroughly enjoyed that, darn if that don't sound familiar. LOL
what ever was in back came out, ufo's, what is in front goes in
back to make room for what is going in front.
The draws are scary, LOL To say it mildly, if not looked into for
a length of a month. Not a big eater, but a big buyer, got to learn to
cut down. LOL
Dang I could put this review into the MAKE ME LAUGH CONTEST!
Glad I am not the only one laughing here for sure, great going.
Hi ,,
Miz Kitty
you have the making of a good story, but the part that I am putting in here of course is my opinion on writing it....as follows....
(Larry drifted back into unconsciousness knowing in his heart he would live.
Would his life be normal after this exposure to the chemical? This was yet to
be known. What mattered most, he was alive, and could go on with his work.)
Keep working at it, smiling.
As they say one step at a time.
Best wishes
Miz Kitty
I enjoyed reading this story, very neat.
Robbie should remember easy come may be
also easy go. Smiling, and stealing never pays off.
Very good.
Liked the way it ended too
Miz Kitty
That was beautiful, how in all our sadness, when we stop
thinking only of ourselves and reach out to others, there
is joy and such a blessing in giving.
Thank you for sharing. Count our blessings, everyone.
Miz Kitty
That was most moving. I believe God does not give us pets here,
to never see them when we go home. How much more He loves
us. When a sparrow falls. His heart is far by far unmeasureable.
The love He has for those who fell doing their duty for their country.
It isn't what He wished things to be as they are, but He works His
miracles and wonders to bring His children home.
Miz Kitty
Everything that happens has a reason. It is not just floating around
ready to have the big bang explode.
God has a reason, I believe for everything down to the last dot and the
t crossed.
It is amazing, but it is a picture, I believe of God showing how to the
last splite second, He is and always will be in control.
Thank you for sharing these, I thoroughly enjoyed reading.
Dear daydreamer, first I would like to thank you for your very kindness
to me.
Now for you, I think it is very brave of you to go after what you enjoy
and writing is a wonderful gift to cultivate, just like flowers in a
garden. Tender loving care, There were two words you have mixed
up, when referring to someone that something is ( their(s) ) or their play is in your life. ( for an example). The word ( there ) is like:
there is a blue bird on my window sill. This is a common mistake,
so don't let it stump you, ok. You keep on writing, I am glad you
felt free to share your life with those here, you take good care of you
and I hope you get out to your garden soon.
Hugsss
Merry Christmas
Miz Kitty
I would love to have the book, it catches your imagination right off.
The sence of adventure that is facing these two ignites the thrill
of moving ahead with the story, wish you could read faster to get to the next happening. Smiling, I wonder if Wal Mart still has this particular
book. Smiling here. Thank you.
Miz Kitty
Just click on the black briefcase and it will take you to where you
would be able to read some of my writings. Your kindly invited to
do so. Would enjoy your opinion. Thank you for asking.
Hugss
Miz Kitty
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