A very beautiful poem. You caught me by the first line and made me feel the pain your poem spoke. It is really is an excellent job you have done here. We all know that it is possible, many times for some, not to find the love they need to sustain them. Little do some of us realize that the person we are after may only be what we want at the moment and that years from now we will have to walk away and like another love again that fits with our grown up reality. Keep up the good work.
Avery sad, but meaningful story. You should always let the person you love know that you do. Say "I Love You' many times a day, so that the person knows that you do. I loved your story, it was very meaningful as well as an excellent job, No spelling or grammer errors. Keep up the excellent work.
A beautiful poem! You grabbed me at the first line and never let me go until the end. You made your character come to life, both things a mark of a great poet!!!! No spelling or grammer errors at all. I loved your poem, you have a gift for poetry. Keep up the excellent work.
You brought your character to life, the mark of good poetry. I loved your story and the ending was great, it is best to grow up and know that you are OK. Which, as we all know is not all that easy. My Dad was loving, but because he's had my mothers rough treatment, he never toll her to live me alone and it was horror to live with her insanity, that is why I no longer have a mother and I feel that I am so much more than "OK" for it. Keep up the excellent work.
Scary story. I can see it all unfolding even when he was forewarned that it could happen. In a way it is a shame that they had to meet with a car accident, neither of them had one thought about what he had experienced earlier, even though he'd told her about it. Both of them should have been more aware of the forewarning, and Not looked at their watches at the same moment. Keep up the good work, I liked your story a lot. Very well written.
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