Will u believe if i say it made me cry like anything...i dont know if you have gone through something like that but each word of yours connects to a place deepin my heart.Thank you.It gives me strength. Its beautiful.
Ps: i read and loved both parts.
Yes its rainy days in punjab indeed.And yes its rain..dancing in the rain that brings happiness.As i love rain i could relate to it.Keep writing.Innocently written..innocently received.
Once upon a time there was a girl,a girl who shared a strained relationship with her father and never believed in love.But she learnt to be happy by herself and wherever she went she made people laugh. Everyday,she would go to school and study with a curious yet innocent heart and then return home to once again face the traumatising experience of the consequences of her father's drinking habit. One day,she met someone who fell in love with her and so did she but she was afraid to fall in love as she believed that everyone in this world leaves you one day not by means of death but by consciously choosing to live a life without them.But he was so determined to love her that one day she just gave up and surrendered her heart to him.She thought she found true happiness but one day he went away to fulfill his dreams and she was left with nothing but loneliness to engulf her in times of pain which he used to heal.It was not his fault but it was his choice and this choice affected their relationship to the extent that even when he came back to her,it didnt last long and he ended up falling out of love with her.Hopelessly in love as she was, she stayed with him for as long and in any way he could allow.But a time came when he started to disrespect her,judge her habits,her likes and her love for him.He rejected her in the worst way possible making her doubt herself. Because of that,she grew unhappy and distressed.She was devoid of all hope and all she was left with were questions that she longed to ask him and her father but there was no one to answer_________________________. Until finally,the loneliness stopped to bother her and she strived to survive this loss.She didnt try to overcome the pain but to accept and embrace it because she felt that this pain is what defined her.She decided to let go of them but still loved them enough to accept them and cherish them if they ever wished to return.But about one thing she was sure that everyone does leave and may be that is what makes you understand yourself better.
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