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Review of Hear Me  
Review by M. Whitehead
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
This poem made me feel very appreciative that someone would write that. Thank you, CEH
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Review of My Snowflake  
Review by M. Whitehead
Rated: E | (3.5)
The poem was good, though I thought you good have gone deeper with the concept.
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Review by M. Whitehead
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
I think you meant to say that Mother Nature never ceased to amaze you, not Mother Nature ceased to amaze me. Little things like that make all the difference. I believe that your story has potentional, though it seems a bit shallow in some places. But, seeing as this is a first chapter, there is some allowance for that. Your descriptions of the surrounding people and places are quite good. I particularly enjoyed the tree scene.
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Review of Take Me Fast  
Review by M. Whitehead
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Not quite Shakespeare, but it is pretty good. I like how you seem to be welcoming the numbing winter instead of regretting the warm summer. Not many poets would do that.20
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Review by M. Whitehead
Rated: E | (4.0)
This made me smile. It's very sweet, and the rhyming gives it a sing-songy lilt to it, which reminences of the song mentioned in your poem. Very, very nice. Good job.
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Review by M. Whitehead
Rated: E | (3.0)
I like where it's going, but it's not finished yet, is it? Let me know when it is done, and I'll give you better review, 'kay?
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