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Review of The Seed  
Review by Candra Kongsaysy
Rated: E | (3.5)
I was very intrigued by the story and had to read it several times.

I might be slow, but I don't understand how the King and his other 2 sons (there are 3 sons I believe. Danh is a girl) knew that Midhe didn't grow the orchid. Did they figure there was no way he could grow something so nice?

And I don't know why you put "Shade, post, and bubble" in bold letters. Am I missing something?

Otherwise, good read.
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