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Review by Carlee
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Oh my goodness, this story gave me the creeps.

Did Smitty plan the whole night? Did he know the guy in the back of the narrator's car? This was interesting, suspenseful, and creative.
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Review of The Sound  
Review by Carlee
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
This kept me reading because I was really curious as to how it would end but what WAS the sound? And what was wrong with Fred?
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Review by Carlee
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Very eerie but I like it! It's a very interesting take and format. So if I understand correctly the patient's brain is conversing with itself. At first I thought it was two patients in a dark cell talking to one another but now I get it :) Nice job.

Grammar is good, it's well structured.
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Review of Infected  
Review by Carlee
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Ohh this is great, I didn't want it to be over so soon! So what was it from? The spider or rat? Haha. Very good imagery as well. Good concept for a story.
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Review of 26 June 2011  
Review by Carlee
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very unique idea for a story! Is it true? And how did he get her number?

The end made me happy! Something I would want to happen to myself!
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Review of Want for Love  
Review by Carlee
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Love is very complicated. It has so many different kinds of effects on people it's crazy. Good, bad, in-between. In the narrator's case, I got the impression that they were once in love but they were betrayed. The are suicidal and they want their death to be a consequence to the person who broke their heart.

It's powerful. Especially the last few lines.
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