Honestly I just love this poem like it tricked me before I got to the end of the poem I would have never known you were talking about food. But overall it was a great poem I loved it and now I'm kind of hungry.
Honestly the author could have use a better choice of words to decribe when god calls his angels home and also there could have been a little more i kind of got bored by the 3rd stanza but overall i saw where the author was coming from and i understood the poem
I think the poem could have been a little better, it didn't really grab me like i hoping it would and i also really didn't understand it to much. I felt like it could have used more words to describe the heart. The title is really misleading i thought it was going to be a lot happier than it was but it was kind of really sad.
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