Yes... I would love to be apart of "Your Coffee House" The mix of words used to bind coffee and writing was wonderful.. I can smell the coffee brewing and I can visualize opening a book and reading it peacefully while sipping my coffee. Thank you for indroducing such a wonderful idea and although I am a newbie, please allow me to play some part in your Coffee House.
I loved your story, it kept me reading and wanting to know more. I don't read sci-fi much, but after reading your story, I wanted to know more regarding the journey of this man and where he is off to next. I did have to read some parts a few times to get the right understanding of what you were trying to say... it's me, not you But over all, I found it intriguing, interesting and I want to read more. Thank you for that and I await the continuation. Kindly message me when you have done that please.
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Eternal
This poem certainly brought a tear to my eyes. Its very emotional, speaks of one trying to make sense of something where there are no answers. I understand this poem, it speaks volumes. It flows so smoothly and at the end gives some hope where perhaps there is none. It was loverly to read.
I must admit, while reading this poem, I could smell those roses, smell the salt air. It certainly took me on a journey of a few memories I have regarding the ocean. I think its a poem well done for a first timer. Poems are all about passion, emotion, something from the heart, something deep. Your poem has emotion and is from the heart. I look forward to reading your next one.. Well done.
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But over all, I found it intriguing, interesting and I want to read more. Thank you for that and I await the continuation. Kindly message me when you have done that please.