It is my pleasure to find somebody Indian on this site. You've achieved many more badges, that's impressive. Bravo!
I am honored to both read and comment on your work "OLD HINDI FILM SONGS". I chose this because I was intrigued what must be in there and had quite strange feeling to read something in Hindi on English website .
First Impression/Thoughts:
It's quite an effort that you have taken to gather the list of the songs along with lyrics at one place. I am stunned. You have successfully achieved that and thanks for reminding all the memorable songs collection right from Lata Mangeshkar to the singers I have heard only on television.
Creativity/Impact:
Undoubtedly very creative and brazen effort to put through. It does reminds good romantic, sad, patriotic, etc songs through your collection.
Plot/Content:
Perfect! It does include all songs from 1940's onwards and listed alphabetically. This makes browsing easy.
Technique/Technical Notes:
I am not a technical person as I am a newbie here. However you have taken quite a effort to write all those songs that are difficult to find anywhere on Internet. I must say I'm impressed! You've done great.
Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:
This was an interesting read. Your efforts have mesmerized me. Thanks a lot for sharing your talent with me today.
Bravo! Hush! I cannot stop laughing. You made me forget everything.
How do you do this everytime Ken! Charming and beguiling readers with your spells????
I feel like coming their and give you a tight hug. Its always pleasure, enlightening and adventure to read your work. I can do that again and again, trust me!!!!
Thanks for sharing your talent with me today.
Write on! And give us opportunity to be blessed. All the best.
It is my pleasant opportunity to read and judge your work "Yes". Yeah! it does feel that way. Bravo!
Your few words does hold much of a promise. You have achieved and earned it, I must say.
Your poem doe enlightens few of my those moments when I did that and it feels great.
First Impression/Thoughts:
Nice theme. I has a pleasure to read something different.
Creativity/Impact:
Indefinitely very creative and simple. I like that you keep it simple in words. It's a general trend people write and write in difficult words that sometimes goes beyond understanding.
Plot/Content:
I can't say anything. As always, I feel it's about how a writer wants to deliver his/her story. So, the plot is always best. It's about how you deliver it and creates interest to readers. I think you've achieved that.
Technique/Technical Notes:
I am not that great writer. So can't tell you about techniques but yes I find it best in my point of view.
Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:
I find it a worth and a pleasure to read.
First Impression/Thoughts:
Very different story and interesting even.
Creativity/Impact:
This is no doubt very creative and something innovative. I have not read the first part so can't tell how was the impact, but yeah the story has grip from what I understand.
Plot/Content:
I have not read this complete yet. Only till 5th chapter, but it appears fascinating.
Technique/Technical Notes:
Well! this needs to be edited. There are few grammatical mistakes as far as I know.
Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:
It was worth reading and spending time.
Thanks for giving me an opportunity to both read and comment on your work. After reading this Sci-fi/Dark story, I am looking forward to read its second chapter. In my opinion, its moreover a dark story than any Sci-fi.
First Impression/Thoughts:
It was great effort that you wrote an unimaginary story and we are blessed to read something new and creative. I would have been more relaxed if you could have narrated a very short introduction to the characters, as it was difficult to relate characters while reading it.
Creativity/Impact:
Undoubtedly, it was creative and it does have great impact on reader. As I said earlier, the second chapter would reveal more secret to this story and give more shape to it. In between it struck me that the story could have more thrill and more horror to it, so as to hold the overall impact to its place.
Plot/Content:
The plot is very well expressed and I anticipate a good ending to it. Only one thing I am not sure is: you've written "Biball" instead of "Bible", is there any specific reason??or is it typo error?? or my wrong understanding??
Technique/Technical Notes:
I cannot say anything about technique. I believe every writer has different taste to what they write and how they write. Well! it was great reading this different story and your mission is accomplished by making reader visualize what and how you see the things through. You deserve a great round of applause for delivering the plot and content to the readers as is.
Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:
An educational and informative read indefinitely. Many thanks for sharing your talent and creativity with me.
Hi Ken!
I was doing a random review and saw your nice humor poem. As usual you knocked it.
What else I can say???? I bet you have maximum number of poems with rating 5 and yet another to that count. I am nobody to comment on your work.You are such an talented person and poet I have met so far.
It does have good humor to it.
Oh! Falling in love with your poems.
Keep Writing and give us opportunity to praise your nice art.
I loved it Ken and I am speechless 'coz it made me cry, touched my heart and soul. I am breathless now, I was unaware that I was holding my breath while I was reading it. Oh my! if you would have been 25, who knows.........
Just flirting! it my hobby.
Last but bot least, finally when I am gaining my wits, its amazing, stupendous.
First Impression/Thoughts:
This definitely delivers feelings and reaches to heart.
Creativity/Impact:
Nice rhymes . The best lines I founf were :
"I’ve given frequent thought to mornings that we share,
Your laugh and smile I get so lost inside your stare,
I see you through a tunnel this darkness needs a flare,
Just a shimmer of light signaling that you might care,"
Plot/Content:
The poem is very creative and satisfies readers hunger. Very Innovative and emotional at some points.
Technique/Technical Notes:
Everything is fine however I find there are two stanzas that are repeating. I don't know whether its an error or it's as is. Otherwise technically perfect in my opinion. I am not a great writer but yes emotions and reading is what I understand.
Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:
Loved it. Thanks for sharing your feelings and making my day.
That's Lovely! Mesmerizing even. . You wrote all those feelings in just 7 lines and it directly reaches to heart.
I must say! A big fan of your's is waiting in que.
Who said you are OLD??
Is there any course or graduation you did in poetry?? You've explained very well. I must take lessons from you. I don't even know a bit of it
And yes that's quite a place you have in the background of your pic.
This is really good. It made me shiver.
The way this short story is written gives hope and a clear message that nothing is impossible if you truely believe your instincts.
Its about achieving a goal, positivity in life and on top of that it gives pleasure of being sated. The most beautiful lines that I found interesting were "Maybe it was desire that got me here. No, it wasn't desire. It was the refusal to accept the events that created me. The refusal to learn and to heal. It was desire that was my ultimate undoing. The desire to salvage and remain in the past. The desire to keep those memories and feelings alive. Well, today those desires are finished. I know now what I must do. I will never fully heal but I will accept what I've become. It's time to grasp what is rightfully mine. My future awaits...", maybe because I find this close to my heart.
It also enlightens the fact in one's life growing from ordinary to extraordinary, darkness to light, being saint and lots more... the more you relate with your life the more you'll find interesting.
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