~You have described a situation wherin the character is confused and jumbled into tangled feelings and trapped in thoughts. When this character tries to find some peace and give a considerate thought to it, sitting in green ambiance; the chracter finds a way through, Which you described as 'Mourining Dove'. I don't know whether there was any other meaning to it. However I read it in this way. May be because of the situation I'm in. But it makes me feel good. Thanks!~

~A Spenserian sonnet form is apt to describe that content and I appreciate that you followed rhymes abab cdcd efef gg pattern and the syllable count along with iambic pentameter. You did great job~

~I do not see any grammar errors nor do I see any punctuation errors. But these are just my opinions, I am no expert. I am here to read and enjoy other author's work~

~Exquisite, impeccable and flawless for me However I was hoping for no end to this poem I do feel this way... when it is about love. This is something close to my heart. It's appreciable and remarkable the creativity you have shown to express each and every detail about love. I am mesmerized~

~I liked the form..flow.. everything. I do not care about rhymes when the content and deliverance is perfect. What matters is the overall effect that if does on reader's mind~

~I do not find any grammar or punctuation errors. It was perfect for me atleast. But those are just my thoughts. I am no expert. I am here to read and enjoy.~

~It was innovative and very thoughtful to write something different and so imaginative. I was dancing on air. I could see rainbow and diving into it~

~Quatrain form with aabb, aabb... rhyme scheme is well expressed and remarkable. The flow and words are prefect and takes reader's into different world of fantasies~

~I didn't find any errors in punctuation and grammar errors. But I think, in 3rd stanza it should be 'oh!' rather than simply 'O'. May be this is writer's style to write.... to put a different effect. I sometimes do so. Who cares about English and grammar; if it reads and sounds well then I like each and every thing. It doesn't need to be perfect always. Sometimes it's good to find something innovative. However this is just my opinion. I am no expert. I am here just to read and enjoy.~

~Creative and well expressed poem. A very well known fact of getting married, taking vows together, lost in love forever and cannot live without each other... are remarkable. The characters in the poem ... that are of-course you and your wife are romantic... and utterly smitten....bewitched and beguiled by each other~

~The flow is perfect and you have used abca, abca... rhyme scheme which is considerate thought and goes well in the poem. However in my opinion, in 7th stanza you used rhyming with word 'else' with same word; there's no other rhyming word to it which somewhere ticks me~

~I do not see any grammar errors or punctuation errors. But these are just my opinions, other's might have different observations.~

~Deep down inside my heart,
To God, A wish I ask,
To keep us together,
“Till death do us part”~

~Creative poem indeed. The well known feelings when one falls in love are cleverly written. However, the feelings of love are quite known and the words are quite familiar. There is nothing innovative in that. I believe you can do better and pamper your feelings of love to write more appealing, so that your reader's would love and appreciate your master piece~

~I see that you've used abcb.... rhyme scheme. The flow is easy to read and takes away reader's to your small romantic story and feelings that you have gone through. Good luck with your love~

~I do not see any grammar or punctuation errors. however I am no expert and these are just my suggestions; other author's and reviewer's might think and feel differently~

~That you're my one desire,
the one I cherish most,
My heart would always seek you out,
on many a distant coast~

Typo error: a)Title : It should be 'Unrequited' and not 'Unrequieted'
b) 'Separate' and not 'Seperate'
c) 'Cruelest' and not 'Cruellest'

~As soon as I started reading your poem I was fully involved. The start was very catchy however I feel you could have end it differently or else it looks incomplete to me. Well, these are just my suggestions. Other's might think differently~

~It is free-verse poem and you carried out well. I was only expecting a little different end~

I do not see any grammar or punctuation errors. I am no expert. I am here to read and enjoy other author's work~

~Singing the words to same old songs
Treading footsteps on familiar streets~

~ Its good to find you and your poem... your thoughts about love. The content and thought is appreciable and I see that you are new here. That was not bad at all. I liked your attempt,
Though I would suggest you to read other author's work... how they write and different forms of poem. I see potential in you. I myself have learnt a lot since I've joined. We writer's are here to help others and learn something new~

~It's free-verse poem and flow was quite good.~

~ I am no expert to point out technical errors. I am here to enjoy other author's work and learn new things~

~The silent blossoms in the beautiful heart~