Very interesting story.I was drawn in and held wanting more.
The flow of words kept me wanting to read on.
Great story.Curious where the story is going and how it will end
This story got me interested from the beginning.
The way the characters became friends and thru out the many changes they went thru they remained loyal.
Your way with words is very interesting and flows very well.
The one thing I might suggest is to keep writing. You are a storyteller.
This a great story. There are some good branching off areas where a whole new storyline could take off. Tim-Tim is a great character for a new storyline. Also going back to when Marigold was a child. You are doing a good job of lining your characters up to expand them in some very interesting ways
This speaks to me in a profound way. What we image can become our dreams.Learning to use imagination can open up a world of dreams and possiblies. Keep writing your words are gifts
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