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Review of Prom  
Review by Chass15
Rated: E | (4.5)
Really sad! :( But I loved it! The detail was really good and the story was written very well! I liked it! I do just wish there could've been more detail about how upset she was that he never showed..
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Review by Chass15
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I really liked it!! The detail was good, I could really picture it all! I loved the twist ending too, really funny! :D
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Review of Come Back To Me  
Review by Chass15
Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked it! The faint rhyme really fit. I really liked this one!!
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Review of No Longer Here  
Review by Chass15
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
You can really feel the emotion in this poem. It was the really good wording that did that. I really liked it. And, sorry for your loss!!
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Review of Perspective  
Review by Chass15
Rated: 13+ | (1.5)
Honestly, this poem was very confusing. The word choice in general was all over the place. it seemed like nothing fit where you had put it. I think this poem could have potential but it seemed as if you just through words together. now, please don't think I'm being rude. I'm trying not to be. but, how did your poem fit the title? What was your mindset when you wrote this? I'm just trying to understand what you meant. My mind is blown when trying to understand this. It was alltogether confusing.. Sorry
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Review of Good Vs. Evil  
Review by Chass15
Rated: E | (3.0)
I thought the overall message was good. Overall, I liked the poem. The rhyme honestly through me off a little. I think that poem was meant to be on the darker, more depressing side. And though it was still good, the rhyme made it sound a little sing-songy. I think that the rhyme weakened the meaning and that maybe other word choices could've really made the emotion stand out. But, I still liked it (:
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Review of The Bitter End  
Review by Chass15
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I can really feel the pain you were going through. The word choice you used was really good. I think that maybe there could've a few improvements to really make it stand out. But other than I liked it. :)
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Review by Chass15
Rated: E | (4.0)
that seems to be very common, and its sad :(. Though, I actually liked it I loved the diction
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Review by Chass15
Rated: E | (4.0)
This poem was really fun to read. The decriptions you used to describe the toys coming to life were really good!
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Review of Selfless Bastard  
Review by Chass15
Rated: E | (4.0)
I thought the imagery was very good. I especially liked when you wrote, "Age is always lurking in the darkest corner. Awaiting to squash my childhood , my teens, my twenties." i could really visualize this when I was reading it.
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