hey...my first impression is EXCELLENTLY awesome but so emotionally sad.rhyme have nice reflection.
Grammar/Spelling;is well-written,no found errors.MAY GOD BLESSES ALL OF YOUR WRITINGS. WRITE ON !!!
howdy Dreamseeker,my overall impression is totally EXCELLENT!!! YOUR POEM IS AWESOME!!! VERY MEANINGFUL,THE RHYME HAS A NICE REFLECTION OF THE WRITER.MAY GOD BLESSES ALL OF YOUR WRITING IN THE NEAR FUTURE.KEEP YOUR MAGICAL PEN ON WRITING A GREAT PIECE OF WRITES,YOU ARE 100% A GREAT WRITER!!! WRITES...ON!!! PLEASE KINDLY VISIT MY PORT ALSO,THANK'S SO MUCH IN ADVANCE! CHERRY ''SHONEN'' DANIELS
Ohayou gozaimasu,Robert(good morning,ROBERT)MY OVERALL IMPRESSION IS EXCELLENT! I LIKE THE CONCEPT OF YOUR STORY BECAUSE IT'S ALL ABOUT NATURE,IT'S SO COOL! WELL,IN THE NEAR FUTURE,YOU'LL BE A GREAT WRITER!!! MAY GOD BLESS YOUR GREAT WRITES.
KEEP UP YOUR GREAT WRITING.
OHAYOU RAINDANCE1127...THIS IS AWESOME!!! THE SYNTAX OF THE POEM IS WELL-RHYME FORMING.
SPELLING/GRAMMAR;IS NO ERRORS FOUND.
THIS IS EXCELLENT !!! GOD BLESS! KEEP ON WRITING!!!
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