Clouseau's (clouseau) Reviews

Wonderful story!

It is so well written! I was hooked at the beginning and had my own ideas where this was going so the ending took me by surprise. I was delighted - and I don't use that word very often. Nicely done!

The story also tells itself in a perfectly compact format. You could make it longer, but I'm not sure you could add anything to the story.

Bravo!

4

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#1851140

Review of My Fault

Review by Clouseau

Rated: 13+

| (3.0)

First of all, you write poetry like I do. It is a very free form. I like it because I think my mind works that way.
The second reason I "like" this, is because the style of writing works well with the subject. Dark feelings and morbid introspection seem to work best in a free style.
The last reason, is because I'm familiar with the subject, so I feel some empathy.
Writing can be very theraputic.

5

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#1849876

Review of alone, not lonely

Review by Clouseau

Rated: E

| (3.5)

I like the topic and the way you have described it. You've taken something as uncomplicated as being by yourself and described it in a very stripped down uncomplicated way. Personally, I love my alone time. It's good to not have someone pulling at your sleeve for a while. Nicely done!

6

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#1846790

Review of Boise City

Review by Clouseau

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

One has to have lived in the flat, dry prarie, to fully appreciate the picture you paint so vividly! You do it beautifully with so few words. You can almost feel how lonely a place like Boise City is as it can see for unending miles in all directions. Wonderful!

7

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#1846774

Review of Starbeams on Tulsa

Review by Clouseau

Rated: ASR

| (4.0)

Having lived in Oklahoma for 20 years made it easy for me to visualize the picture you were painting. This is good stuff! I like the cleverness of "the winds of change". You can reference the ravages or tornado or time. Were you trying to do both? I also like the visual of the moon and star in the prarie night sky!