Nice beginning, but you should work on your spelling and punctuation to get it to 100%. It's hard to read due to those mistakes. I'm sure you could raise the once you update it to reflect the necessary changes to make the flow & readability better.
I'm not sure if you've gotten a similar response. Although I am sure what you've written is great, it's difficult to read because of the format being centered.
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