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Review by Cory M Tobin
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great poem with a great story. The first two lines I was thinking viking but then at the end I was thinking civil war. Keep up the good work!
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Review by Cory M Tobin
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Excellent dialogue. It really read more like a script. I thought there was a lot of room for describing the setting and really flowering out some description. The plot and over all flow of the story was really easy to follow though and I did find myself wanting to read more as I went along. Solid chapter!
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