Lovely memories, its a sad reality when forced to accept change, especially when we are young. your storyline was easy to follow and visualize, well done.
Such a said story of life that touches many of us, I don't know how you rate such a devastation, but I gave it 5 stars, because I understand the pain of it.
Nice lines, with a nice flow. do a quick spell check on this piece, in the second line" I constantly wonder who holds he key to that fortress?, I think you have "he" instead of "the"
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