expressive, and emotional ink, well done, just check structure of lines, your second line goes across the page while the rest of the lines are better formated
Expressive write, lots obvious emotion. Just do a spell check for (barley), it should be barely, and (acre) should be care, and maybe take out the (I) before swear and add (to) before school. Otherwise a good write.
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