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Review by chuck
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow. So very relatable. I am, at the moment, going through that ( except the last part so far) and your words stirred my soul. Very sad. very nice. Thank you for sharing.
chuck
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Review by chuck
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi. I enjoyed reading your poem. I'm glad you put it to paper and out of your head to share. To be honest I expected the writer to be older. you seem to have a flair for transposing complicated matters into simplification. I envy you that. Good luck on your writing career. I will be on the look out for your name at Amazon etal.

chuck
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Review of Seek and Destroy  
Review by chuck
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

Welcome home from me to whomever related this situation to you. the words hit home. powerful, emotional, and oh,so very real.

chuck
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Review of Dusk to Dawn  
Review by chuck
Rated: E | (3.0)

Hi, Interesting perspective. Well written. Have you tired experimenting with changing the format? Maybe break the lines and make it a "poem" format? No, i don't really know what I'm talking about, but it seems like it is a powerful piece that could really have more impact if broken in other places.
chuck
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Review of Today  
Review by chuck
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi,
I just finished reading your poem and I find it to be very powerful. The emotions are raw, yet refined and evoke empathy, not sympathy. I am not very experienced in writing and far from any kind of expert but I will try to give you my honest thoughts.
As I stated , the work carried very strong emotions and succeeds in presenting them. I enjoyed it over-all but I did find it a bit awkward in a couple of places. As if you substituted form for the rhyme. Otherwise I enjoyed it very much and learned a thing or two as well. Thank you for sharing such personal
feelings.
Best regards,
chuck
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