hey i think this story is good but its kinda to long and you could have made two stories and make it more fun then it is now and i hope to see a new one and its better then this one and more fun im not being mean i do like your story its just to long for me i think well thanks for taking the time to read this!
this is a really good story like really keep writing it and i love to read more this is the best one i like reading good stories so once again just keep up the good work you have a lot of good stuff in the story that is good a lot of strong words i like thanks again
hey i like this poem and i hope you write more like this and too keep up the good work and i would love to see more when i get back on just keep on the good work sir so im just telling you to do more because i would love to read more and habe a great day
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