This is a nice story of hunting. People know that you can go hunting and get this shot in sight of you. Then it happen. What a great feeling your first shot or your shots every time you goes.
It good idea that you told them, but how does this thing really stop. I have gotten graphic that I know someone dosen't really made it but I didn't use it. So hopefully the information that you tells me to do will help.
A hero indiguise. How it was great to know that Jack came out on top. He didn't believe he would make it but in the end he became the hero. He has one spell that if he use it more than 3 time he'll lose. But he only needed it one time. After the flash it was all over and he came out on top.
I love my grandmother very much she is not here to read any of this to me but now I'm a grandmother and I quite sure that my grandchildren feels the same way. I sure that grandmother are very special that why I enjoy your poem very much. Even if it doesn't rhyme.
I wonder what kind of pain do you have. It must really hurt that you feel it each day. The lord is willing to take away some of that pain. Just give him some time and it will surely go away.
I have a daughter and feels the same way. Oh how I love my daughter. My daughter has children too and I know that she loves them just as much as I love her. Keeps writing the poems that you write. Its a breath of fresh air to read this poem.
I like the story and your are right that it only has one syablle to each word. That each holds that bear like it their both of them. Then they get up out of bed. You can tell they both love each other.
It is a very nice poem of a broken heart and love leaving. I know how you change before your very eyes. Hoping that he will change. Maybe in the future there will be another love coming along the path but for now you have to remember what has happen to you from the changes you been through.
It hard to listen to something that you don't want to listen to. It seem best to drown out all the sound of it. You may wish that there were something else beside listening to these sounds but what can you do?
It like you just feel tire of doing the everyday things in life. You can make something by doing something else that you don't normally do. Someone told me that. I use to feel like I drift in life from place to place but I learn that if I do something different while going to these places, I not just a drifter. I am somebody.
It sad to feel the lost of a son. He knows that he has done what he can do on this earth and for that he is a hero to his father. He will always remember how he use to be with his son. Now he must go on with his life knowing that his son has made him proud.
This sounds like a very nice poem. You just written it last night that something. You were right about how you grow up and then the world changes to grown up things. Now it time to do all this other stuff that just isn't cool. But at least you wake up.
This is a very good story of how a vampire gets his prey. He does feel sorry for his victim and then devours them. Making them the next one in line. Or as it is said it afterlife.
It seem like it was a bad day that turn out nice. Althought her boss really never let up on her she was always in hot water. She realize that it was not all about her name but it was part of it.
Is this a poem about a baby or about your love? You can tell that you feel a lot about this person. How no matter what you feel really stronge feeling for this person. I hope it is a poem about someone you love and not about a baby.
This was a lovely story. And a nice peom to be exact. It took me to a place where I long to be. I know that it might have taken you quite awhile to write a lonely poem like that. It is great.
I have always watch the soap too. All my life. YATR is one that seem to always had a twist to it. And AMC has a long line story telling of the love they share between them. It great that you wrote about the soap. Try to keep it up and alway remember never give up on it.
It has a voice that tells of someone you know. I am reminds me of being love by someone and that special feeling. I tells you that I do remember who you are and I am not that forgetful. Thanks that you knows who that someone is and how I feel. It is a nice poem.
It like you is one of a kind. You seem to go on like no one can do what you do and then you notice that it is the same. You hadn't notice this until you think that you is different from all the others. Things that is different like the rock or a leave can still be the same as you and me.
I know the feeling because I has the HIV virius. I try to take each day by day but I don't know if there will be an outburst or not. It hard but I learn to live with it.
Its a lonely poem. It set you in a place that you remember when you was lonely. That you want your boat to sails and just let go free. It makes you feel like lonelyness is something that you have to conquer and something that you will conquer. It all about loneliness.
The laughter of the day use to be Fred and now this little boy with a ball started something that hasn't happen since the death of Fred. Laughter that will always be remember thoughtout the nursing home. What they will give to have that laughter to continue each day of the rest of their life.
It is great the way he handle those men. Could he be a spirit that god himself has sent down to help the little girl. Yet he tells the little girl that if she doesn't hurry he will leave her. Does the little girl get a good life with this person. She has seen the most awful life with those dead men.
This is a nice poem. Did they really hear the women or was they just merely listenily. I heard the women calls he was just going to think it was all just a life bvefore it was gone. Yet no one listen to her. She cries, she yell and still no one listen before it to late.
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