A mother, she's the most special person in this whole-wide world! No one can take her place. This poem is such a wonderful tribute to God's most intricate creation, a mother! I'm glad that you could tell her 'how much you love her' cause sometimes we fail to tell people how much we love them when they're around us.
Keep writing and keep writing from the depths of your heart!
I despise fathers who can be so cruel, that too with their own child! It's disgusting. This one's written with deep emotion, but I liked the other one better, i guess we all have choices :)
I know people feign all the time
But this habit is not just mine
When I'm sad I show I'm crying,
If you still think
I'm a faker
I'm fine
with it
For you never really knew me
Everone isn't the same you see!
Elladen, your poetry just got me to write those lines^^. Let me tell you what's best about this poem is it's so simple, its not begging to get someone's attention, its just putting accross your need to be loved, need for someone to drive away the pain.
isrtly, lovely rhymes, and great theme.BUt you know its never too late, so what if you cant change your past, you have the remore to your future, that's the bright side!
oh another thing, there's nothign wrong in sowing your weakness, its only human to do so, i do it all the time and its a stress buster!
Oh, this is wonderful!
Don't we all love such dreams?! I mean its only in the dreams where you can live with whoever you want to and meet the most unaccessible person too.
What i like about this piece is that its staright from the heart, sweet and innocent!
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