i LOVE this story its so romanic so loveing and careing about to guys name dean and castiel. man you are reallllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyy gooooooooooooooooddddddddddddd. please write more about them please.
i would like to read this from the beginning to learn more about this story. over all i like it, its not choppy at all. what are the alien names, where are they from need more detail. thank you for letting me read your story
try to space out the word like make it go down
like this maybe
cause it is a good reading. i see no misspelling.
i can some what picture someone in love just a little more imagery
but its good keep writing
i really really love this poem your talking about a solider that pass on and now he or she has angel wings. you misspelled solider in the last sentence. but it is very good please write more.
you have a lot of imagery in this story. is this about gore and blood and about a girl. i like this story its something ill read to the end to see what happens.
i believe you are talk a girl that does everthing for her boyfriend and he take everything that she does for granted. but i really like it reminds me of a girl i know you love her boyfriend for everything in the world. my dislike is how you say he and she can you try to maybe use i a little. thank you for let me read your poem
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