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Review by J.C. Pickens
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is such a sweet story. It's been so long since I've read anything warrior cat related and this brought me back. As a tip for the future you may want to add some extra spacing between paragraphs and dialogue. Because of the way writing.com is, everything gets very squashed and becomes condensed and hard to read. Not your fault, but something to keep in mind! Great work nonetheless!
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