I ceased reading after the first five sentences. The writing is telling the reader what is happening instead of showing the reader. It is also in passive voice. Writers should understand these two issues.
Heh! This is excellent; also, I can "relate" about procrastination. Some times one must beat up the writer inside, and threaten more violence in the future if demands are not met promptly. One motivation for me to get memoir #1 done was my friend's age: I wanted to have him read it before he died. Perhaps if you revisit in your mind the reason why you need to write will help. Perhaps write down the reasons. I did this before starting work on my current project, and I think it helped.
Incomprehensible; Sloppy development; sub-standard writing basics; too much going on; gives nothing to the reader that will encourage the reader to keep reading.
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