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Review of Quorilax  
Review by Disthron
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I really enjoyed your story. Though furris general are not my thing I am a huge lover of gentle giantesses. This is one of the most well written giantess stories I've read in a long time.

I thought your charecters were well defined and seemed like they could be real people. I identified with the hero and hatted the villains. Although I did think that Ryan was a little thick some times.

Some of your word usage I though was a little ward, Like once you used the word gesticulate (at least I think it was that). Ok, I knew what you meant but every now and agen I'd get taken out of the immersion of the story when I'd think " how the hell uses a word like that?" That might sound silly but that's just what happened while reading it.

Also, there was part when you were describing the Quorilaxian fleet and it's Admiral. Witch just seemed to go on for way too long. I mean it just seemed to go on an on. But most of your other descriptive passages were really good. Most of the time when your describing people, places and events I can "see" it in my mind.

Your story was a tragedy, which I wish I had known going in. If this had been an actual book I'd have throne it down. I had to pick up something and through it. It was really frustrating. I actually almost stopped reading but I guess I was hooked. Sorry but I had to deduct some points for the ending being almost a complete bummer.

Any way, I read your giantess 101 article, I thought it was very good and it lead me to this story. Well, thanks for writing, I gave your story a total 4 (star?) ratting.
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