I loved this letter! It's exactly what GOd would say! My one suggestion is that you rearrange this letter in non-rhyming poem form. That will help it to flow better. But, you have the author's option not to. I encourage you to keep up the "good work" and to keep on writing! Like God said in your letter, you were not given a talent for writing for nothing!
From the first two words I was hooked! This was a great story! It's amazing how many loved ones and friends can come to mind when something like this happens. People we don't seem to see, when we are not in a crisis. The motto: Appreciate every person and every moment of life! Good job! Keep on writing!
I didn't know what to think for laughing! Thank you so much for a good laugh at the ridiculousness of politically correctness.! The school officials were deadly serious, but they really didn't know how obsurd they were! Hopefully, one day they will learn. Untill then, we laugh! Well done! Keep on writing!
Great story! I loved riding along with the writer and his friends in the "bettle". We often forget how easy and convienant it is to run to the corner store and get something here in the USA, that it is totally the opposite in Nepal. Keep on writing!
I enjoyed this story! I loved the descriptions of Nepal and the native "wheeling and dealing", I felt like I was right there in the midst of it! Excellent work! Keep on writing!
What a heartfelt plea! If only they would invest in the lives of others, so that others may do the same.... Keep on writing, because more need to read this!
Wonderful prose! It shows there really is no comparison between the two. They each stand on their own. They're are both beautiful on their own. It all depends upon the eye of the beholder. Keep up the good work and keep on writing!
This is an excellent story! The characters and descriptions ring true, and I felt like I was actually back there in that time period. This is an excellent opening chapter to futures chapters and hopefully a book! I'm looking forward to more! Keep on writing!
This was such a wonderful story sin and redemption. It shows how easily one can distracted from one's original path, onto a path which leads to destruction. All in the name of greed. Oh, one will have the material goods, but, what good are they when the ones you love are gone? Keep on writing!
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